Sunday, March 31, 2013

Cecilia's Fate

This is the first draft of a short story written for my Intro to Creative Writing.  I'll be posting the revisions I make to it up here as well.  As I intend to make a living off of this type of writing, it is therefore the closest to my heart, so do not try to pass this piece off as your own. 



Cecilia’s Fate
 
 

            It was cold, and the sidewalks were coated with a layer of slush so that she had to step in the footprints left behind by others to keep her canvas shoes dry.  No one had expected it to snow that day, it was too far into spring.

            The snow had only recently fallen—during the last few hours of the school day.  She had spent all of her Arithmetic’s class craning her neck to watch the flakes come down and then melt on the street below.

            There was only one set of footprints in the slush, and she hoped that whoever came before her was going was going the same way she was. 

            Her walk home to her family’s apartment was only a few blocks, but the wind and the weight of the books under her arm made it much longer.

            Across the street from the apartment building was a dumpy old fairground.  She’d heard that the city was going to tear it down and build more apartment buildings.  Today, there was something new to the fairground, a kind of light and sparkle that she’d never seen before.  Just inside the rotted wooden gate was a horse-drawn wagon.  It was colored a bright and obscene green.  The paint was old and discolored such that it appeared in different shades as she approached the wagon.

            It wasn’t like the wagons that sold vegetables at the markets—this was like the wagons in the photographs of the pioneers who first ventured out to the west.  It wasn’t roofed however, by canvas, but rather with wood—it even had its own tiny chimney jutting out from the side.  It was more common for vendors to use automobiles, but not unheard of for horse-drawn wagons to still exist.

            The lurid green color was so out of place in the endless gray of the city that she was drawn to it like a moth to an open flame, heedless of the cold soaking into her shoes.  She had left the safety of the footprints.

            As she crossed from the road onto the opposite sidewalk, a young man appeared from out of the wagon.  He clambered down a set of rickety stairs extending from the rear of the wagon to the ground.

            The man came around to the front of the wagon and stopped short when he saw the little girl.  He was a funny looking man—his eyes seemed too big for his face, and he wore boots that would rival a mink coat—

            “What?” the man said, looking down at his feet, “They’re better in snow than those ridiculous cloth things you’re wearing!”

            She blinked.  “I’m sorry, I—I didn’t mean to be rude.”

            He waved her apology off, “I’m not really offended.”  He turned and took a few steps back towards the wagon, then stopped.  “Aren’t you coming?”  The man turned again to look at her.

            She shook her head.

            He sighed.  “What’s the difference between over there,” he indicated the sidewalk, “and over here?”

            She shook her head again.

            The young man looked exasperated.  “But I’ve got something for you!  It’s very special and I don’t think anyone else should have it.”

            The girl crossed her arms.  “What is it?” she asked with the voice her mother reserved for haggling with shopkeepers.

            “I won’t show you if you don’t come over here.”

 

            It was a key.  It was old and had mother-of-pearl laid into the handle.  It had her name on it—Cecilia.  The letters looped and curled into themselves.  If she had tried to trace the path of a single line she would’ve gotten lost and stared at it forever.  The lines of her name would being to dance and shift if she starred at them for long enough.

            The inside of the man’s wagon was the strangest thing she’d ever seen.  There were two workbenches running opposite each other on either side.  The young man sat on a wheeled stool and flew from one bench to the other with an air of much practice.  The spaced was cramped, and the man hunched over—with his over large eyes, this made him look bird-like.

            Above the workbenches were shelves, cluttered with strange and obscure books with symbols on the spines that she would never see again in her life.  In between the books were haphazardly placed gadgets.  They were mechanical in nature, and defied all the young girl’s attempts to guess their function.

            There was a small fire towards the front of the wagon—no doubt attached to that odd little chimney.  The light from the flames lit the small space with a strong orange glow.

            The man didn’t want any money in exchange for the key.  He said it had been hers for quite some time and she pretended to believe him.

           

            When she passed the fairground again on her way to school, she saw that the wagon was gone and the wooden gate was closed.

            The snow had melted away and so she was free to walk wherever she chose.  None of her friends had noticed the young man or his bright green wagon.  It wasn’t there when she went home in the evening either.  She suspected it was gone forever.

 

            “This key will fit into any lock, but the doors it opens…they will not take you to any place you know.  Listen to me because this is important,” he leaned in close to her and she realized that she could not name the color of his large glassy eyes.  “Are you listening?”

            “Yes,” the girl squirmed uncomfortably.

            “Good.  Once you use this key, and enter—you’re not paying attention!”

            Her eyes snapped back up to his.  She had been watching the letters on the key writhe around.  “Sorry,” she set the key down on the workbench.

            “Nothing that you see will ever be the same way again.  What you choose to do with this key is the most important decision of your life.”

            She didn’t want to be around him anymore—he was now no longer simply intriguing.  Now, he was talking nonsense, as her father would say.  He was probably one of those people that belong in a sanitarium.  “What are you talking about?  You’re not making any sense.” said her mother’s haggling voice. 

            The man became impatient.  “It’s a place, another place.  Don’t you read adventure books?”

            “They’re not real,” she insisted, petulantly, like an adult.

            “This place is real.”

            “Oh yeah?  Well show me a map of it then,” this was a child’s voice.

            “Only madmen make maps of the other world.”

            “Why?”

            “Because it is impossible to know.  It has many different…layers—levels.  It doesn’t function the way is world does.”

            She decided then that he did belong in a sanitarium, and the young man could sense that he had lost her.  His thin angular shoulders drooped, he sighed.  “I’m sorry,” he said “but that key isn’t yours anymore.  You should go now.”

            The girl went, and stepped back into the footprints on the other sidewalk, and felt relieved that she never saw the man or his wagon again.  It wasn’t until years later that she wished she had taken the key.

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